Book Tour for Savage Summer & Guest Post from the Author

Like a lot of readers out there, I enjoy a good mystery with lots of action and suspense. Ruth Bainbridge has recently released the first book in her new Curt Savage mystery series. Based on the book’s description, the author has created an atypical private investigator as the protagonist, which is what really caught my interest. I hope you’ll take a moment to check out the book and read an excerpt, which is followed by an informative guest post from Bainbridge explaining the importance of authentic dialogue in writing.


Savage Summer by Ruth Bainbridge

SAVAGE_Book Cover

Publication Date: February 28, 2014

Genre: Mystery/Thriller



“When life gives you lemons … be sure to spit the pits out of that lemonade you’re making. Otherwise you’ll choke.” – Curt Savage

The past year has not been a good one for Curt Savage. Depressed over the death of a loved one, he’s gone into hiding, becoming entirely too comfortable with saying that he’s in the Witness Protection Program. But the urge to find that elusive killer puts his MIA status on hold. With the help of his new buddy Mike, he delves into the murky world of tracking down a killer — and uncovering who poisoned a neighbor’s dog. 

SAVAGE SUMMER is the first in the Curt Savage mystery series. Going from former cop to private dick, he represents a new kind of detective—the reluctant kind. As his best bud Mike puts it, “Private investigation just got Savage.”


The phone jarred me out of the fantasy. I awoke suddenly, shielding the light that assaulted my eyes. The odor of Ruthie’s perfume was everywhere.

“Ruth?” I called out. Disoriented, I reached out to her side of the bed, expecting her to be there. It took me several more seconds to realize that she was dead.

“Hello,” I started. The gravel in my throat demanded that I clear it once or twice.

“I’m responding to the ad about Ruth Warwick’s murder.”

Those words officially woke me up. More effective than any cup of coffee, the voice synthesizer disguised the caller’s identity, but the point was that someone had finally phoned. Ever since I’d been dispensed with as a suspect, I’d placed small pennysaver ads in papers published in both Pennsylvania and Ruthie’s home state of Connecticut. Somebody knew something, but I hoped this wasn’t some clown trying to get the reward money from punking my ass.

“Yes, go ahead. I’m listening,” I replied as I ran for a pen and paper. I wanted to be ready, but all I heard was static and heavy breathing. I guessed that it was “all about the money” time. In a second, they’d be asking for the details of how to collect. I figured I’d beat them to that particular punch. “Look, if you’re worried about the reward, the $10,000 will be released when it leads to the arrest of the person, or persons, responsible.”

“I don’t care about the money. There are bigger things going on.”

“What? What do you mean? What things?”

“In due time, Savage.”

“You know my name? How—“

“Inconsequential, don’t you think? Right now, all I can say is this—Ruth was having an affair.”

The click of the receiver on the other end told me the call was concluded. Shocked by the accusation, I stared at the phone, still in my hand. In a million years, I’d never expected a call like that. I collapsed in a chair, trying to think things through. I concluded it had to be a joke perpetrated by someone that thought I hadn’t suffered enough. I slammed the phone back into its stand and took my shower. My stomach was in knots. I was upset that someone was trying to put things in my head about the woman I still loved.

Purchase Savage Summer from Amazon:  Savage Summer (Curt Savage Mysteries)



Born in the idyllic, sleepy town of Ithaca, NY, Ruth Bainbridge has been a lover of mysteries for her entire life.

Ever since a child, she has consumed detective stories at regular intervals, becoming enamored with all the superstars of crime. She loved nothing more than to match wits with the likes of Hercule Poirot, Miss Marple, Thomas Pitt, Lord Peter Wimsey, Richard Jury and Edward X Delaney, becoming inspired by their brilliance. Hoping to emulate her writing idol’s achievements in dreaming up such characters, she started composing her own short stories.

However, life interfered with her plans of becoming the next hopeful to try a life of crime—on paper at least. Devoting herself to her marriage and the raising of four children, the empty nest syndrome gave her the impetus to return to her first love—murder.

SAVAGE SUMMER is Ms. Bainbridge’s debut novel. It introduces Curtis Owen Savage into the world of ink and fury. Savage is engaged and about to be married when the brutal murder of his fiancée sends the world crashing down around him. Depressed, he isolates himself to better deal with the pain, but his beloved Ruthie won’t leave him alone. Haunting him with her presence, he becomes obsessed with finding her killer, and making him pay for taking her away.

With the help of a quirky friend and an old colleague, he takes his first steps, but the poisoning of a next door neighbor’s dog lands him his first case—and into a new profession. Hired as a private detective, he navigates through a complex series of clues to discover why someone attempted to kill the black Pomeranian. In the midst of trying to track down the motive, he receives his first anonymous phone call from a phantom who insists he knows secrets about his fiancé’s death. Dubbing the caller Dr. Shadows, the tidbits scattered become the breadcrumbs that lead Savage down a dark rabbit hole that was never meant to be discovered.

Her next planned project is MURDER MOST FOWL. Alex “Trout” Matthews, is a former NYC detective. Now retired, he moves to the town of Portsmith, Idaho so he can focus on his one passion—fishing. But as Ruth puts it, “Murder rarely leaves an inquisitive mind alone for long.” He soon finds himself pulled back in the stream of things and knee-deep in mystery.

Author Links

Please be sure to join Ms. Bainbridge’s mailing list to keep updated on exclusive deals.





Author Guest Post half size

Dialogue Fingerprinting
by Ruth Bainbridge 

An overlooked key in creating a character is dialogue. The simple fact is that everyone does not speak alike. And while there is such a thing as perfect English, it’s rarely spoken.  This definitely holds true for me. While I try to fit a noun and verb in most of my sentences, most often I add one as an afterthought in my every day conversations—and I am not alone. Therefore, to have all your characters express themselves in an identical manner is not staying true their essence.

This entire subject is why I am such a rabid eavesdropper. If someone is having a conversation around me, I will key in on it to get the flavor of the speech used. For instance, one day a teenage girl sat next to me. A companion joined her and asked what was wrong. She responded, “I have a lot of tension leaving my body today.”

Now any good English major would tell you that the above is not a proper way to express this concept, but I find it more than fine. It’s unique and dramatic and draws me into what this young girl was feeling, and isn’t this what writers are trying to do in developing a character? It’s why giving characters latitude in speech patterns and inflections is mandatory.

Another example happened a couple of days ago. I’m still chuckling over the exchange. It went something like this:

First Woman:  Dogs can sense I’m scared of them or something.

Second Woman:  Yup, they can tell who likes ‘em and who doesn’t.

First Woman:  I suppose.

Second Woman:  And their owners … cheesh!

First Woman:   I know! Some go too far. There’s a place for dogs, but when they let the dog sleep with them, it’s, it’s—

Second Woman:  It’s too much! Having a dog in bed … disgusting! I mean, they go outside and their hiney is all over the place. Then you let them go under the covers … very unsanitary.

First, let me go on record as saying I find dog’s hiney very cute indeed. And I suppose there’s no use even trying to yank this back on track, but I will try since the above is a perfect, and I do mean perfect, example of the type of exchange that is memorable. To “clean it up” (pun very much intended) would require losing the spirit of those delightful women who I’d like to pack up and take home so I’d never run out of ideas again.

So for anyone wanting to create characters that distinguish themselves in the minds of readers, let them express themselves. Don’t turn them into something they’re not by not letting their speech reflect them. In other words, make what they’re saying clear, but always highlight who they really are.

 A special thank you to Ms. Bainbridge for her contribution to this post, and she makes some important points to writers who incorporate dialogue into their writing, whether it’s a narrative essay or a work  of fiction.  In school, we are taught rules for academic writing and speech so we all use  a standard English to prevent miscommunication with our audience , and it’s important to know these rules when the occasion arises for us to communicate in this manner. However, there are times when we can break the rules. Writing dialogue is one of those times.

I appreciate the wonderful example Bainbridge includes in her article that transcribes an actual conversation conveying the honest thoughts of two real people.  I emphasize “honest” and “real” because these qualities are so important in writing. When telling a story, you owe it to your reader to be authentic in the depiction of the characters that you’ve worked so hard to create.  A character’s speech should be consistent with his or her personality, background, and experiences.  By doing this, you are creating a more well-rounded, realistic character which is what readers, like me, want when they read or listen to a good story. 



Share you thoughts with me!

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s